Tuesday, January 30, 2007

THE DAY THE ROBOSAURS CAME BACK... FROM THE DEAD!!!

This isn't exactly what I have in mind for the story, but I still like it.

This is the first draft of my tale of woe and loss, love and bliss, truly a fable for the ages. As always, leave feedback, be it positive or negative.

"Montenegro Jones"

A picture of Dark Cove, Maine, 3km southeast of Weston, Maine, United States, taken on May 9th, 1996.

My McSweeney's submission, in very, very rough form. I feel like it's too inside-jokey, too personal, and I'm not so sure that people who haven't hung out with my friends and I would find it accessible. Suggestions? Give them, be they positive or negative.